2nd Draft Audience Feedback

I showed my second draft video to a select group of people, ranging from people most likely in my target audience and an older generation. There responses were positive with a good amount of feedback for me to carry on with as well as work on. 

Leah, 17:

- like when it cuts from the beach to the woods as well as the change of costume and hair

- thought the spinning on the beach and foot prints in the sand were effective

- liked the beach scenes

- loved the reversal of the jump as it fitted well with the timing

- try experimenting with different transitions and effects

- experiment with the colour scheme

Hermione, 18

- like the locations used in video

- the use of one model works well as it shows continuity and it's not as confusing and complex for the audience

- the narrative can be seen strongly through the switching of two locations

Dad, 

- like the contrast between the woodland and beach, with tidal imagery 'tiptoeing' across beach

- nice tight framing of model against background

-  effective cuts from trees and sky that match lyric 'take me higher'

- costume changes make the visual narrative more interesting for the viewer


Focus Group:

I showed a group of my target audience my second draft, asking them what they liked and if my video showed my genre well. I also asked them some improvements, which I can use and consider for the final drafts of my video. I will definitely take into consideration their opinions because they're my target audience, who would watch the video.